Felix UFO Story

7 Responses to Felix UFO Story

1. joner1 says:

   December 4, 2015 at 2:59 pm

   Very good cliff hanger Felix
2. Nathan says:

   December 4, 2015 at 3:04 pm

   very interesting
3. trimw says:

   December 4, 2015 at 3:08 pm

   very good story
4. Alice Bray says:

   December 4, 2015 at 5:25 pm

   Great story, amazing use of adverbials. Hope it isn’t real
   I really enjoyed reading your story.
5. leew says:

   December 8, 2015 at 2:00 pm

   Great story! Superb! I like your suspense at the end. 🙂
6. sihaz says:

   December 8, 2015 at 2:10 pm

   I read this story at my home and my mum said it was amazing.
7. Trishan says:

   December 8, 2015 at 2:51 pm

   cliff hanger!!!!

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