What a beautiful piece of writing Josie! I hope to see more posts from you!
The story was really thought out and I loved the vocabulary such as cursed and admire
This is interesting
Josie your story is much better than mine
A very descriptive piece of work. I loved it because you used a range of powerful words. I can’t wait to see what you write next!
that’s amazing! :]
well done josephine
it’s a really good piece of writing Josie! More! Please????
Good story!
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What a beautiful piece of writing Josie! I hope to see more posts from you!
The story was really thought out and I loved the vocabulary such as cursed and admire
This is interesting
Josie your story is much better than mine
A very descriptive piece of work. I loved it because you used a range of powerful words. I can’t wait to see what you write next!
that’s amazing! :]
well done josephine
it’s a really good piece of writing Josie! More! Please????
Good story!