The lonely Cat in distress by Matthew

Posted on May 19, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The lonely Cat in distress by Matthew

  1. Shadow (Damian W.S.) says:
    June 12, 2015 at 8:41 am

    *That’s very nice work you got there.

    ->I think you could use,Nether the less,my mum surprisingly screamed.

  2. Kieran/Jayden says:
    June 12, 2015 at 12:23 pm

    Nice piece of work! Lots of detail too and description, and it seems so real! Keep up the good work Matthew.
    One thing you could work on in your writing is using more unusual words like you have used ‘verdant’ in your first paragraph.

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