The hurt hopper

Posted on May 19, 2015 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The hurt hopper

  1. Anonymous says:
    June 12, 2015 at 8:35 am

    -> We like the how you have used the same sentence as an opener and an ending.

    -> the paragraphing

    *u could use dashes

    • Frankie and Finley says:
      June 12, 2015 at 12:20 pm

      ->We also like how you have used your opener as and ending
      To do better u should try use dashes

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