I like this blog post because it builds up to a problem which makes it very dramatic and it also has clear sentence meaning. We also liked how you use a lot of speech.
I also liked the part where the part when you first found the bunny and named it Toffee but you could add some more detail and description to describe the bunny and on where you live and how did you find it, you could also add a bit suspense and better vocabulary.
I like this blog post because it builds up to a problem which makes it very dramatic and it also has clear sentence meaning. We also liked how you use a lot of speech.
I also liked the part where the part when you first found the bunny and named it Toffee but you could add some more detail and description to describe the bunny and on where you live and how did you find it, you could also add a bit suspense and better vocabulary.