Wow, that is a beautiful opening. Highly evocative, I felt like I was there.
Be careful with your tense – “would have”, never “would of”.
I’d really like to read your whole Morpurgo story, based on what I’ve seen from your opening. Perhaps you could bring it with you to Maths one day so I can take a look?
Well done. Mr T
I love the extract loads of detail that really hooks me (and probably lots of other people) into the story!
Wow, that is a beautiful opening. Highly evocative, I felt like I was there.
Be careful with your tense – “would have”, never “would of”.
I’d really like to read your whole Morpurgo story, based on what I’ve seen from your opening. Perhaps you could bring it with you to Maths one day so I can take a look?
Well done. Mr T